Post by BeLuna on Apr 5, 2009 17:58:58 GMT -6
I feel like, even after reading this, I don't really know Kevin. He doesn't seem to have much of a personality or past history. What happens when he gets bored? How is that a negative trait?
Also, please work on spelling. cosin = cousin; moveing = moving; polight = polite. It's not a big deal, but use a spell check before posting if you could.
Fix those things and then I'll read it again.
